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遵循以下簡單指南,有助於改善您的寫作能力。 如果您是視覺型學習者,請跳到頁尾觀看實用影片,了解在寫作 Task 2 取得 7 級分的七個步驟。 

步驟 1:回答題目的各個部分

雅思寫作 Task 2 要求您以一篇短篇作文回應一項陳述或前提。您必須仔細閱讀題目,回答題目所有部分。以下方題目為例,您必須做到 3 件事才能達到更高的級分,並向考官展示您有回應題目中所有部分。 

  1. 提出一個觀點 

  2. 提出另一個觀點 

  3. 表達您的意見 


例題:  

Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 


提出 一個觀點 然後再提出 另一個觀點,最後表達 您的意見

Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I beleve that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.  

There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for city. Visitors get chance to see wild animals that they would not see unless they travelled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these aminals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate teh educational importance of zoos.  

However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoo. This is cruel for animal and they often die because they is not in natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel. 

Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to be cared for, they should be looked after in theier natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Goverments should look after the precious wild animals at their country and should close down zoos that profit from them. 

In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. We can look at wild animals on the internet and we can feel happy knowing that they are free. 

步驟 2:明確表達立場

雖然您會在短篇作文中提出不同觀點,但仍必須表達清楚的立場。最主要是讓考官知道您對該題目的想法。您的立場必須在全文中保持清晰一致。切勿在結論改變立場。 

  • Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe... 

  • However, many people feel that... 

  • I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos... 

步驟 3:組織短篇作文

短篇作文寫作未必是一項困難挑戰。以結構的方式表達您的觀點,運用段落表達並闡述每個觀點。善用以下各點將有助您撰寫文章。 

  • 利用緒論作為開頭。  

  • 提出重要觀點,然後進一步闡述。  

  • 總結全文,表達您對題目的意見。  

  • 在每段中清晰闡述觀點。  

  • 在每段之間空一行,以便考官閱讀。  

短篇作文範本 

緒論 

Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I heire that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them. 

第一個觀點 

There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for city. Visitors get chance to see wild animals that they would not see unless they travelled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these aminals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate he educational importance of zoos. 

第二個觀點 

However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoo. This is heir for animal and they often die because they is not in natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel.  

我的意見 

Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to be cared for, they should be looked after in heir natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Goverments should look after the precious wild animals at their country and should close down zoos that profit from them. 

結論 

In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. As far as I am concerned, wild animals should be set free. 

步驟 4:運用連接詞

連接詞或轉折詞能夠有效銜接作答內容。它們能將句子和想法連繫在一起。下表顯示短篇作文常用的連接詞句。 

On one handWhereas
On the other handBecause
FirstlySimilarly
AnotherFinally
HoweverNevertheless
DespiteConsequently
AlthoughIn conclusion
RegardlessIn addition
For exampleAs a result
ThereforeUndoubtedly

步驟 5:運用多元化詞彙

寫作是向讀者傳達想法和觀點的方式,因此應該運用容易理解的詞彙。並且只應使用您能輕易拼字的字詞。運用自然組合的字詞,意即搭配詞,並在文中使用慣用語/片語動詞。這樣可向考官證明您能夠運用多元化的詞彙。最後,完成寫作後請檢查有沒有拼字錯誤及錯別字。 

搭配詞的例子: 

  • Tourist attraction  

  • Alternate ways  

  • Rare species  

  • Natural habitat  

慣用語和片語動詞的例子: 

  • To be cared for  

  • Close down  

  • Make money  

  • Chance to see  

  • Looked after

步驟 6:正確使用各種文法結構

如果您以 7 級分為目標,那麼便需要掌握簡單句和複雜句。請記住,您的句子必須保持正確無誤。您認為可以如何做到? 沒錯,就是不斷練習。立即體驗模擬考題,並分析您的常見錯誤。當您不斷練習不同句子結構時,必定能夠提升任何主題的短篇作文寫作能力。 

文法結構例子

文章 Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for (the) city; visitors get (a) chance
主詞/動詞一致性 because they is (are) not in natural 
介系詞 wild animals at (in) their country 
複數 We frequently see news story (stories)
標點符號 Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for the city.

步驟 7:仔細檢查您的短篇作文

即使是一篇完美的短篇作文,您仍可能會大意犯下拼字錯誤和文法錯誤。因此仔細檢查短篇作文,便可輕鬆解決這些問題。完成寫作後,問一下自己: 

  • 我是否回答完所有部分? 

  • 我是否分段作答? 

  • 我是否運用連接詞句? 

  • 我是否運用標點符號? 

  • 我是否檢查文章? 

  • 我的拼字是否正確?我是否運用多元化詞彙? 

  • 我是否運用複雜句結構? 

如果以上所有答案皆為「是」,那麼您正慢慢邁向取得雅思 7 級分的目標! 

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