Ikuti panduan ringkas ini untuk membantu meningkatkan kemahiran menulis anda. Sekiranya anda lebih gemar belajar secara visual, tonton video di akhir halaman yang turut mempunyai maklumat berguna mengenai tujuh langkah untuk memperoleh jalur 7 dalam Tugasan Penulisan 2.
Langkah 1: Jawab semua bahagian soalan
Tugasan Penulisan 2 IELTS memerlukan anda menulis karangan sebagai respons/jawapan kepada sesuatu pernyataan, atau premis. Anda mesti membaca soalan dengan teliti bagi memastikan semua bahagian dijawab. Sebagai contoh, dalam soalan di bawah, anda mesti melakukan tiga perkara untuk mencapai jalur yang lebih tinggi dan menunjukkan kepada pemeriksa bahawa anda memenuhi keperluan semua bahagian tugasan.
Kemukakan satu pandangan
Kemukakan pandangan yang satu lagi
Kemukakan pendapat anda
Soalan contoh:
Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Kemukakan satu pandangan dan kemudian pandangan yang satu lagi dan kemudian kemukakan pendapat anda.
Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.
There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for city. Visitors get chance to see wild animals that they would not see unless they travelled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these aminals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate teh educational importance of zoos.
However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoo. This is cruel for animal and they often die because they is not in natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel.
Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to be cared for, they should be looked after in their natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Governments should look after the precious wild animals at their country and should close down zoos that profit from them.
In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. We can look at wild animals on the internet and we can feel happy knowing that they are free.
Langkah 2: Kemukakan pendapat yang jelas
Walaupun anda mengemukakan pandangan yang berbeza dalam karangan anda, anda mesti menunjukkan pendapat yang jelas. Ini bermaksud anda mesti memberitahu pemeriksa apa yang anda fikirkan mengenai soalan tersebut. Pendapat anda mesti jelas untuk seluruh karangan. Jangan ubah pendapat anda dalam bahagian kesimpulan.
Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe...
However, many people feel that...
I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos...
Langkah 3: Susun karangan anda
Penulisan karangan tidak semestinya sesuatu yang sukar dilakukan. Sampaikan idea anda secara tersusun menggunakan perenggan untuk mengemukakan dan mengembangkan setiap idea. Gunakan isi penting berikut untuk membantu menyusun karangan anda.
Tunjukkan kepada pembaca di mana permulaan dengan perenggan pendahuluan.
Kemukakan idea-idea yang penting dan kemudian, huraikan lebih lanjut.
Akhiri karangan dengan pendapat anda mengenai soalan tersebut.
Kembangkan idea yang jelas dalam setiap perenggan.
Permudahkan untuk pemeriksa dengan meninggalkan ruang di antara setiap perenggan.
Contoh karangan
Pendahuluan
Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I heire that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.
Pandangan pertama
There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for city. Visitors get chance to see wild animals that they would not see unless they travelled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these animals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate the educational importance of zoos.
Pandangan kedua
However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoo. This is heir for animal and they often die because they is not in natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel.
Pendapat saya
Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to be cared for, they should be looked after in heir natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Goverments should look after the precious wild animals at their country and should close down zoos that profit from them.
Kesimpulan
In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. As far as I am concerned, wild animals should be set free.
Langkah 4: Gunakan kata hubung
Kata hubung atau kata peralihan menghubungkan perkataan dan frasa yang menjadikan jawapan anda sepadu. Ia umpama gam yang menyatukan ayat dan idea anda. Jadual di bawah menunjukkan beberapa kata hubung yang sering digunakan dalam karangan.
On one hand | Whereas |
On the other hand | Because |
Firstly | Similarly |
Another | Finally |
However | Nevertheless |
Despite | Consequently |
Although | In conclusion |
Regardless | In addition |
For example | As a result |
Therefore | Undoubtedly |
Langkah 5: Gunakan pelbagai perbendaharaan kata
Penulisan ialah kaedah untuk menyampaikan pemikiran dan idea anda kepada pembaca. Oleh itu, gunakan perbendaharaan kata yang senang difahami. Selain itu, hanya gunakan perkataan yang anda boleh eja dengan mudah. Gunakan perkataan yang lazim digunakan bersama iaitu kolokasi. Masukkan juga bahasa idiomatik/frasa kata kerja dalam karangan anda. Ini membuktikan kepada pemeriksa bahawa anda boleh menggunakan pelbagai perbendaharaan kata. Akhir sekali, periksa kesalahan ejaan dan kesalahan tipografi setelah melengkapkan tugasan penulisan anda.
Contoh kolokasi:
Tourist attraction
Alternate ways
Rare species
Natural habitat
Contoh bahasa idiomatik dan frasa kata kerja:
To be cared for
Close down
Make money
Chance to see
Looked after
Langkah 6: Gunakan pelbagai struktur tatabahasa dengan betul
Apabila anda ingin memperoleh jalur 7, anda perlu menguasai kedua-dua ayat yang mudah dan kompleks. Ingat bahawa anda juga mesti menghasilkan ayat yang bebas daripada kesalahan. Jadi, bagaimana anda fikir anda dapat mencapainya? Ya, dengan membuat latihan. Cuba ujian contoh dan buat analisis kesalahan yang biasa anda lakukan. Jika anda terus mencuba struktur ayat yang berbeza, kami pasti anda akan meningkatkan mutu penulisan karangan bagi apa jua topik.
Contoh struktur tatabahasa
Artikel | Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for (the) city; visitors get (a) chance |
Kepadanan subjek/kata kerja | because they is (are) not in natural |
Kata sendi nama | wild animals at (in) their country |
Kata jamak | We frequently see news story (stories) |
Tanda baca | Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for the city. |
Langkah 7: Semak karangan anda dengan teliti
Walaupun setelah anda dapat menghasilkan karangan yang sempurna, anda mungkin membuat kesalahan ejaan dan tatabahasa yang cuai. Perkara ini dapat ditangani dengan mudah sekiranya anda menyemak karangan anda dengan teliti. Tanyakan pada diri anda soalan berikut setelah anda melengkapkan tugasan penulisan anda.
Adakah saya menjawab semua bahagian?
Adakah saya menggunakan perenggan?
Adakah saya menggunakan kata hubung?
Adakah saya menggunakan tanda baca?
Adakah saya menyemak kerja saya?
Adakah ejaan saya betul dan adakah saya menggunakan pelbagai perbendaharaan kata?
Adakah saya menggunakan struktur ayat yang kompleks?
Jika anda dapat menjawab soalan-soalan ini dengan positif, peluang anda untuk mencapai jalur 7 pasti cerah!
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