雅思写作任务 2：七个技巧帮您获得 7 分

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雅思写作任务 2 要求您写一篇文章来回应某项陈述或某个前提。您必须仔细阅审题，回答各部分内容。例如，在以下题目中，您必须完成 3 件事才能获得更高的分数，向考官表明您在回应任务所含各部分内容。 

1. 介绍一种观点 

2. 再介绍另一种观点 

3. 提出您自己的看法 

样题：  

Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.

讨论这两种观点，并提出您自己的看法。 

介绍 一种观点 再介绍 另一种观点，然后提出 您自己的看法. 

Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I heire that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.  

There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for city. Visitors get chance to see wild animals that they would not see unless they travelled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these aminals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate he educational importance of zoos.  

However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoo. This is cruel for animal and they often die because they is not in natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel. 

Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to be cared for, they should be looked after in heir natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Goverments should look after the precious wild animals at their country and should close down zoos that profit from them. 

In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. We can look at wild animals on the internet and we can feel happy knowing that they are free. 

尽管您在作文中展示了不同的观点，但您必须表明清晰的立场。这意味着，您必须让考官知道您对题目的想法。您必须在整篇作文中表明清晰的立场。不要在结论中改变主意。 

• Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe... 

• However, many people feel that... 

• I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos... 

写好一篇作文不见得是难事。以结构化的方式呈现您的想法，分段逐一描述并展开论述。以下几点可帮助您搭建作文结构。 

• 通过引言告诉读者文章如何着手点题。  

• 提出重要的想法，然后进一步详细说明。  

• 在作文的结尾，提出您对问题的看法。  

• 每一段都要有明确的中心思想。  

• 段落之间注意留出间距，方便考官阅读。  

范文 

引言 

Wild animals are kept in zoos all over world. At present, zoos are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild animals to attract vistors. I heire that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them. 

第一种观点 

There are many good reasons for having zoos in our cities. Most importantly, they attract tourists and make money for city. Visitors get chance to see wild animals that they would not see unless they travelled far away. Rare species, like Chinese panda, or Indian tiger, or African rhino for example, are endangered and if we had no zoos they would die. Zoos care for these aminals and give us chance to see them. Therefore, we cannot underestimate he educational importance of zoos. 

第二种观点 

However, many people feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and small areas in zoo. This is heir for animal and they often die because they is not in natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick because area is not big enough or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans. Caging wild animals is unhealthy for the animals and is cruel.  

我的看法 

Both views put forward valid points, however, I strongly believe that zoos are no place for wild animals. If animals need to be cared for, they should be looked after in heir natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Goverments should look after the precious wild animals at their country and should close down zoos that profit from them. 

结论 

In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals because they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. As far as I am concerned, wild animals should be set free. 

连接词或过渡词是指能够让您的答案衔接更加紧密的词和短语。它像胶水一样，让您的句子和想法严丝合缝。下表显示了在作文中经常使用的一些连接词。 

写作是为了将您的想法和观点传达给读者。因此，请使用易于理解的词汇。此外，建议您只使用可以熟练拼写的单词。使用听起来自然的词汇搭配，并在作文中使用习惯用语/动词短语。这可以向考官证明您丰富的词汇量。最后，请在完成写作任务后检查拼写错误和打字错误。 

搭配示例： 

• Tourist attraction  

• Alternate ways  

• Rare species  

• Natural habitat  

习语和词汇示例： 

• To be cared for  

• Close down  

• Make money  

• Chance to see  

• Looked after

如果您的目标是获得 7 分，那么您就需要掌握简单句和复合句。而且您还要谨记，必须保证大部分句子没有语法错误。那么，您认为自己要如何才能做到呢？ 没错，要靠练习。做模拟考试练习，分析您常犯的错误。只要您坚持练习不同的句子结构，我们可以确定，您一定会提高命题作文的写作水平。 

语法结构示例

即便您写出了一篇完美的作文，您也可能会因为粗心而出现拼写和语法错误。从头到尾仔细检查您的作文就可以轻易消除这些错误。写作任务完成后，您可以问自己这些问题。 

• 我是否回答了所有部分？ 

• 我是否进行了分段？ 

• 我是否使用了连接词？ 

• 我是否使用了标点符号？ 

• 我是否检查了我的作文？ 

• 我的拼写是否正确，我是否使用了丰富的词汇？ 

• 我是否使用了复杂的句子结构？ 

如果您对这些问题的答案都是肯定的，那么您就有望获得 7 分！ 

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