雅思写作任务1：如何在切题（task achievement）中获得7分以上

写一段清晰的引言，描述您看到的内容。

呈现不相关的信息（例如 the x-axis, the y-axis, the grey line represents female unemployment, the black triangle is males）

用自己的话重新描述题目提示。用同义词和短语来描述非关键信息。（例如，unemployed = people who are unemployed / 1970-2000 = over three decades from 1970 to 2000）

逐字逐句地复制题目的提示（例如，题目中的短语）

在引言中使用 关键词（例如日期、时间、国家、性别）。

将题目中的关键词改为不准确的同义词（例如，unemployed females in Australia to unemployed girls in Oz.）

介绍所有制图、示意图或图表。

图表

The table illustrates employment numbers in Australia over a thirty-year period from 1970 to 2000.

图表

The chart compares the number of cars that were made in France, Germany and Norway over a decade from 2000 to 2010.

示意图

The diagram shows how car parts are assembled.

流程图

The cycle shows how man-made fibres are produced.

地图

The maps illustrate changes in an English village over a century from 1915 to 2015.

曲线图

The graph presents data from Ireland showing cinema attendance in major cities in 2016.

两张图表

The pie charts show the main energy resources used to generate power in a town in Australia, while the table shows how much energy was consumed by the community in 1989.

7 分

清晰概述主要趋势、差异或各个阶段

6 分

适当选择信息，并提供概述

5 分

机械重复详细信息，缺少清晰概述

使用连接词来总结您所看到的内容。（例如，Overall, To summarise, In summary）

在概述中包含数据或数字。仅对主要趋势或特征进行摘要。

找到图中呈现的趋势。可视化图表中是否存在整体上升、下降或波动？ 是否有任何高点或地点？ 稳定吗？

确定概述中的所有内容。应仅对图中最显著的特征进行摘要陈述。

如果可视化图表是对未来的预测，请在概述中总结未来趋势。

用数字（数据）来突出关键特征。

突出显示可视化图表中整体趋势的变化。（例如，下降）

图表

The table illustrates employment numbers in Australia over a thirty-year period from 1970 to 2000.
 Overall, it can be clearly seen that the numbers of people employed have increased over the period, whereas the unemployed figures have remained stable.

图表

The chart compares the number of cars that were made in France, Germany and Norway over a decade from 2000 to 2010.
In brief, Germany was the major producer of vehicles over this period followed by France and Norway.
 

示意图

The diagram shows how car parts are assembled.
It can be seen that there are four main stages to car manufacturing. To be specific, these are moulding, machining, joining and shearing.
 

流程图

The process shows how man-made fibres are produced.
It can clearly be seen that there are six steps involved in the production of cloth starting with the raw materials and ending with the final product.
 

地图

The maps illustrate changes in an English village over a century from 1915 to 2015.
In summary, in one hundred years, the village has experienced major changes transforming it from a small farming village to an industrial town.
 

曲线图

The graph presents data from Ireland showing cinema attendance in major cities in 2016.
To summarise, it can be seen that the younger age groups visit the cinema most, whereas older people rarely attend.
 

两张图表

The pie charts show the main energy resources used to generate power in a town in Australia, while the chart shows how much energy was consumed by the community in 1989.
Overall, by looking at the charts it can be seen that oil is used the most as an energy source in this town and that most power is required for domestic cooling.
 

7 分

清晰呈现并突出关键信息

6 分

呈现并充分突出关键信息

5 分

呈现了信息，但未充分覆盖关键信息

4 分

尝试解决任务但并未涵盖所有关键信息

曲线图显示了 5 个年龄组，时间跨度为两年

• 5 个年龄组

• 主要趋势

• 突出的数字（例如高、低）

• 两年

饼形图显示 5 种燃料类型

• 5 种不同类型的燃料

• 主要燃料类型

地图显示城镇在 50 年前和现在的情况

• 2 张地图

• 无变化

• 有变化（如地理位置、翻新、拆除）

• 新建（例如建筑、道路、设施）

7 个阶段的流程

• 每一个阶段

• 流程中任何额外的步骤

图表显示了 3 年内的三种产品

• 三种产品

• 三年

• 显眼的数字（例如，最高、最低、异常趋势）

5 分

（学术）机械复述详细信息，缺乏清晰的概述；可能未提供用来支持描述的数据

呈现视觉示意图中给出的数字

机械式呈现数据（例如 In 1992, it was 2%. In 1993, it was 3%. And in 1994, it was 6%...）

呈现可视化图表上所示的正确数字尺度 （例如 hundreds, thousands, ten-thousand, hundred-thousand, millions, tonnes）

数据呈现不准确。请务必仔细阅读 Y 轴，查看显示的数据。

呈现可视化图表数字时，使用正确的数字格式（例如 100；1，000；10，000；100，000；1，000，000）

在回答任务时进行计算（例如计算平均值、对数字进行加减运算）。谨记按照给定的方式呈现数据。

使用视觉示意图中所示的正确数据集（例如 percentage, number, barrels per day, grams, kilograms, people）

错误地理解数据及呈现数据。（例如，将男性说成了女性 - 72% of females play football）